gentle repertoire
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into matric'lated thoughts,
gentle repertoire
- I am, again, measureless
patterns of unequal worth.
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18 comments:
Michelle,
Well done. "Patterns of unequal worth" has me thinking about what gets matriculated.
Thanks for sharing this at OSI.
beautiful ..
thank u michelle ..
ah!! beautiful .. long time i havent tried tanka .. let em try this time :) thanks for the inspiration !
Hi Michelle, this is a nice tanka. It makes one think, for sure your inner voice is well studied and learned. It seems though that that 'book learning' is not very practical for you.
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I loved that last line. It could have people thinking about it forever.
A quite tranquil voice,I believe (or is it just the fish on your blog that lead me to believe so?
Kat
I am so happy I glanced in here today! So quiet and serene, yet filled with questions. Wonderful work.
Michelle, this is a very good tanka. The tone is just lovely.
measureless... without end... what wonders of thought....
I knew you'd write just the perfect one. A really super tanka. I too admire patterns of unequal worth.
lovely~
I like this! Beautiful!
Fine words - not so unusual happenings, I think!
"I am again measureless..."
a lovely refreshing read Hope you are feeling better.
Michelle- this tanka is amazing. You have such depth contained within these words. I like that you played with the syllabic content of matriculated to make it fit because the word is perfect. You are indeed measureless!
Beautifully done~ thanks for sharing it~
ooh, that's lovely. great rhythm and tone and sound. it bears repeating.
Love the idea of the voice slipping! The persona becomes totally absorbed in the fragments of the inner voice! Beautiful!
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