windshield theater

tailgating driver
watches windshield theater
natures reflection
geese fly over power lines
fade to black screen... end credits

any constructive criticism or comments on this tanka is greatly appreciated. 

electric guitar

loosed hairstrings on tub
form musical instrument
electric guitar

gray- white cat

morning's interim
thirty robins flit all round
enter... gray- white cat

gray headed oak

ice farms to edge of
these mapped territories
a gray headed oak

celestial tea

lipton sunset spills
across kentucky evening
celestial tea

evening

encompassing color
emarginates the sky
etching light and dark shadows
evenly along night's
easel. one awaits new
edition with each sun's
ebbing toward... horizon.

The Heart of the Woods

A whittled sky
Becomes an open spigot
Where winter grows
On a sapling whose branches
Hold a broached robin.
She's watching soft-silent waves churn
Along a field's edge
As cold winds approach
She thrusts into the numbing air
Like an uncoiling arrow-
The heart of the woods.