tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post1953794863577695344..comments2023-05-08T05:36:44.769-04:00Comments on Naquillity: gentle repertoireNaquillityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-68617001584519524432009-07-19T21:27:23.014-04:002009-07-19T21:27:23.014-04:00Michelle,Well done. "Patterns of unequal wort...Michelle,<br>Well done. "Patterns of unequal worth" has me thinking about what gets matriculated. <br>Thanks for sharing this at OSI.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-80082326662402332792009-07-20T02:37:48.547-04:002009-07-20T02:37:48.547-04:00beautiful ..thank u michelle ..beautiful ..<br><br>thank u michelle ..zoya gautamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-8911655917870989152009-07-20T03:17:01.916-04:002009-07-20T03:17:01.916-04:00ah!! beautiful .. long time i havent tried tanka ....ah!! beautiful .. long time i havent tried tanka .. let em try this time :) thanks for the inspiration !Lost Mermaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12054580161277108262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-30713081062018359702009-07-20T03:23:21.225-04:002009-07-20T03:23:21.225-04:00Hi Michelle, this is a nice tanka. It makes one th...Hi Michelle, this is a nice tanka. It makes one think, for sure your inner voice is well studied and learned. It seems though that that 'book learning' is not very practical for <i>you</i>.<br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-37937534564768789992009-07-20T03:47:36.062-04:002009-07-20T03:47:36.062-04:00I loved that last line. It could have people think...I loved that last line. It could have people thinking about it forever.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-75243683930576226252009-07-20T08:47:46.553-04:002009-07-20T08:47:46.553-04:00A quite tranquil voice,I believe (or is it just th...A quite tranquil voice,I believe (or is it just the fish on your blog that lead me to believe so?<br><br>KatKat Mortensenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-13519630561385177542009-07-20T16:26:13.875-04:002009-07-20T16:26:13.875-04:00I am so happy I glanced in here today! So quiet an...I am so happy I glanced in here today! So quiet and serene, yet filled with questions. Wonderful work.angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-74146918336021077252009-07-20T16:45:03.957-04:002009-07-20T16:45:03.957-04:00Michelle, this is a very good tanka. The tone is j...Michelle, this is a very good tanka. The tone is just lovely.fourwindshaigahttp://fourwindshaiga.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-1946869958574893262009-07-20T18:23:46.118-04:002009-07-20T18:23:46.118-04:00measureless... without end... what wonders of thou...measureless... without end... what wonders of thought....one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2009/07/19/fluttering-butterflies/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-8933589807179883562009-07-20T23:48:10.365-04:002009-07-20T23:48:10.365-04:00I knew you'd write just the perfect one. A re...I knew you'd write just the perfect one. A really super tanka. I too admire patterns of unequal worth.Quiet Pathshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-5438062283547859222009-07-21T01:28:51.430-04:002009-07-21T01:28:51.430-04:00lovely~lovely~Tammie Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-46231406895455152342009-07-21T13:08:24.302-04:002009-07-21T13:08:24.302-04:00I like this! Beautiful!I like this! Beautiful!Bobbiehttp://constantcurrent.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-85806907315986671052009-07-21T22:53:57.824-04:002009-07-21T22:53:57.824-04:00Fine words - not so unusual happenings, I think!Fine words - not so unusual happenings, I think!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-5757434251642982182009-07-22T00:11:55.107-04:002009-07-22T00:11:55.107-04:00"I am again measureless..."a lovely refr..."I am again measureless..."<br><br>a lovely refreshing read Hope you are feeling better.gabriellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-19925241721600775202009-07-22T07:43:02.290-04:002009-07-22T07:43:02.290-04:00Michelle- this tanka is amazing. You have such de...Michelle- this tanka is amazing. You have such depth contained within these words. I like that you played with the syllabic content of matriculated to make it fit because the word is perfect. You are indeed measureless!Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/07/20/borealis/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-5218748170820337032009-07-22T16:44:59.311-04:002009-07-22T16:44:59.311-04:00Beautifully done~ thanks for sharing it~Beautifully done~ thanks for sharing it~Pattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-48893656707897145072009-07-24T03:10:00.267-04:002009-07-24T03:10:00.267-04:00ooh, that's lovely. great rhythm and tone and ...ooh, that's lovely. great rhythm and tone and sound. it bears repeating.theaccidentalnovelisthttp://theaccidentalnovelist.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-53952886522418567472009-07-24T21:07:09.132-04:002009-07-24T21:07:09.132-04:00Love the idea of the voice slipping! The persona b...Love the idea of the voice slipping! The persona becomes totally absorbed in the fragments of the inner voice! Beautiful!Greyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.com