dreamstone
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dreamstone,
naquillity,
palindrome,
poesaics
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elusive; edge of hard surface.
long... before touch again.
map, lost inside head,
twisted brown and green
with shaded sunshine.
sunshine shaded with
green and brown, twisted-
head inside lost map
again, touch before long;
surface. Hard of edge, elusive,
face your stonedream.
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i really liked the feel of this form...
"learn to try"
this was ridiculously hard for me, but i loved it. thanks again Michelle.
Philippians 1:1-2, 3:7-8
Thanks for linking to my poem, Michelle. Your example is lovely. This form is very hypnotic. I'm going to keep working at it. Haveyou read "Doppelganger"? It's a very eerie palindrome.
I had this form sitting on my desk staring at me forever and finally mustered the strength to give it a try! :-) Here goes nothing......
Echoes of Stardust
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