dreamstone. Your face
elusive; edge of hard surface.
long... before touch again.
map, lost inside head,
twisted brown and green
with shaded sunshine.
sunshine shaded with
green and brown, twisted-
head inside lost map
again, touch before long;
surface. Hard of edge, elusive,
face your stonedream.


paisley said...

i really liked the feel of this form...

"learn to try"

Lancelot said...

this was ridiculously hard for me, but i loved it. thanks again Michelle.

Philippians 1:1-2, 3:7-8

mariacristina said...

Thanks for linking to my poem, Michelle. Your example is lovely. This form is very hypnotic. I'm going to keep working at it. Haveyou read "Doppelganger"? It's a very eerie palindrome.

Scott Clawson said...

I had this form sitting on my desk staring at me forever and finally mustered the strength to give it a try! :-) Here goes nothing......

Echoes of Stardust