wildflower


a precise red bud
unable to abandon
its gradual blossoms

Written for 3ww though I should have gone with Wordless Wednesday as this is my worst haiku, ever...

5 comments:

J.C. Montgomery said...

I don't think so. But I tend never to agree with rules. I pretty much go with my heart, and it likes this.

Naquillity said...

Jc thanks for your support. glad you like it. hope all is well.

fourwindshaiga said...

I agree, you got the point across. Lovely photo. Is that a rose?

Naquillity said...

fourwindshaiga honestly, i don't know. it was the only flower of its kind around the wildlife preserve pond that i could see. i tried looking it up in my field guide but haven't come across it yet.

one more believer said...

nah, you are way way too hard on yourself... each haiku has a wonderful poetic purpose and this is one of those... the fulfillment of purpose a bud to a bloom spoken in a most lovely fashion... and the photo does exactly as a complement... glad you published this post