famished
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famished,
found poem,
grasshopper,
naquillity,
poesaics,
tanka
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are two miniscule circles
of hunger today.
he takes the stone this morning
and waits for a quenching rain.
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9 comments:
Oh, what a delicate piece of writing this is! How wonderful!
Well done, Michelle!
:)
very nice and lovely piece..
shraddha
This is an amazing tanka!! Love the way you've divided the lines and how you've perceived something so easily overlooked and rarely written about--a grasshopper's shoulders. :)
Delicate and poignant. An observation of a detail that can be seen in a wider sense. Well done! I saw a dead huge grasshopper lying beside a road yesterday. It made me sad.
Sweetheart, i love this one.
xo
That was simply delightful! lovely tanka! the visual is great and it touched my heart
Been a while since I dropped by, caught up elsewhere...
thank you for all your lovely comments, always appreciated!
And I just saw just such a little grasshopper today...
This was really pretty.
Such a great visual and so unique.
Thank you for all your nice comments.....I always look forward to hearing from you!
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