barbed fence
horse tries to
scratch backside

brown hair pinched
between fingers

tree limbs
sway in the wind
after a soft rain

tattered bursts of laughter
play on shadowy ground

hot air balloon
dropped into an open field
with careful guidance

a single car
searches nearby

1 comment:

Naquillity said...

Leigh Lear said...

i like this, i'm gonna have to give this form a try.

Monday, April 14, 2008
Blogger Greyscale Territory said...

I have never tried this before.

Love this peeling away of images. It creates a fascinating feeling that you are just given a small peek and the rest is your imagination!



Tuesday, April 15, 2008
Blogger Noah the Great said...

This is interesting.

Tuesday, April 15, 2008
Blogger paisley said...

you really made this look easy michelle.. i have yet to try it as i am still unsure of what exactly i am trying to achieve...

Wednesday, April 16, 2008
Anonymous one more believer said...

this is a beautiful form michelle you have created a wonderful afternoon view... i was looking at mondaymural and started checking out yr poetry forms over on the side... found myself over here... glad i stopped by...

Monday, May 12, 2008

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