grassland
Labels:
grassland,
naquillity,
poesaics,
renga
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horse tries to
scratch backside
brown hair pinched
between fingers
tree limbs
sway in the wind
after a soft rain
tattered bursts of laughter
play on shadowy ground
hot air balloon
dropped into an open field
with careful guidance
a single car
searches nearby
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Leigh Lear said...
i like this, i'm gonna have to give this form a try.
Monday, April 14, 2008
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Blogger Greyscale Territory said...
I have never tried this before.
Love this peeling away of images. It creates a fascinating feeling that you are just given a small peek and the rest is your imagination!
Lovely!
Gemma
Tuesday, April 15, 2008
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Blogger Noah the Great said...
This is interesting.
Tuesday, April 15, 2008
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Blogger paisley said...
you really made this look easy michelle.. i have yet to try it as i am still unsure of what exactly i am trying to achieve...
Wednesday, April 16, 2008
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Anonymous one more believer said...
this is a beautiful form michelle you have created a wonderful afternoon view... i was looking at mondaymural and started checking out yr poetry forms over on the side... found myself over here... glad i stopped by...
Monday, May 12, 2008
July 5, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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