favorite t-shirt
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never felt a sucker punch
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1 comment:
TC said...
:(
I hate it when bad things happen to/in favorite t-shirts. They're favorites for a reason. Seems like nothing bad should ever get to happen in them.
Thursday, February 21, 2008
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Anonymous watermaid said...
So pleased to be able to comment on something you've written. You spend so much time commenting on other people's blogs and providing us all with inspirational words and pictures.
This haiku has a wonderful rhythm and I love the force of 'sucker punch'. It's very clever of you to have worked in all three words.
:o)
Thursday, February 21, 2008
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Blogger Remiman said...
Michelle,
That's what I like about the haiku form: few words, major impact.
Being verbose myself, I find the haiku requires more work than meets the eye. You make it look effortless. But then that's the point right?
rel
Thursday, February 21, 2008
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Anonymous Marcia (MeeAugrahie) said...
I remember my husband's t-shirt, I think it was more than just sucker punched. I really liked the way you told this one, Michelle.
Thursday, February 21, 2008
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Anonymous pia said...
take solace that the tee shirt didn't feel anything :)
There's a beautiful subtle wit to it--the haiku not the tee shirt
Thursday, February 21, 2008
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Blogger Truefaith1963 said...
Sweet words!
Friday, February 22, 2008
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Anonymous gautami tripathy said...
I love the haiku. Unravelled..:D
digging into fruit punch
Friday, February 22, 2008
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Anonymous Christine said...
We always try to protect our favorite T-shirts! Nice use of the words.
Friday, February 22, 2008
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Anonymous Amarettogirl said...
I'm not too familiar with haiku's but it was fun to read this one. Clear, concise and a good punch! Thanks for sharing!
Friday, February 22, 2008
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Blogger Bone said...
There's nothing quite like a favorite shirt. Yet we know their time is limited :)
Saturday, February 23, 2008
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