Beauty Leaves
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beauty leaves,
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Moon licked by character, wasp nest
And a sliver of orange is
Reaching together into
Tongues of landscape
A wild form,
Impeccable.
You just have to trust,
For some kinds,
Beauty
Leaves.
My poem was created for Danika over at the Accidental Novelist. She's given everyone a challenge. You are asked to rewrite bits of her poetry and use them in your own poem. Here are the words:
landscape is a form of character
reaching into leaves a wasp nest
licked together by an orchestra of
tongues wild and orange sliver for
moon impeccable shadow some kinds of
beauty you just have to trust
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Rhian said...
Gorgeous and you managed to detangle the words into a profound vision. loved this:
"You just have to trust,
For some kinds,
Beauty
Leaves."
Monday, November 05, 2007
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Blogger Lisa Andel said...
So that's what it looks like.
Kind of sad.
Monday, November 05, 2007
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Blogger julia said...
'wasp nest
And a sliver of orange is
Reaching together into
Tongues of landscape'
REALLY great.
Monday, November 05, 2007
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Blogger Danika / OpenChannel said...
I'm with Rhian, I like the ending, the double meaning and the rhythm.
Thanks for playing!
Tuesday, November 06, 2007
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Anonymous gautami tripathy said...
You did a great job. I was stuck!
Tuesday, November 06, 2007
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