in the whisper of me (haiku)

she stands forbidden
in the whisper of me, there...
mother's destiny

My first haiku for April's National Poetry Month. Inspired by my iphoneart of the same name: In the whisper of me

6 comments:

Carver said...

Very poignant haiku.

Rambling Woods said...

I agree with Carver

Tammie Lee said...

such a wonderful
and mysterious little piece
with a nice rhythm and dance as well

Al said...

Very intriguing. I love that selfie in your previous post, standing further back brings out your face. Have a great weekend!

eileeninmd said...

Lovely words and haiku! Enjoy the rest of your weekend!

Geraldine said...

Yes, beautiful and mysterious words.