hypnotic dandelion
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sulk against a summer wind,
hypnotic dand'lion
... your silver afro, loosed ends
drip frenzied, white fireflies.
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that's just wonderful!
I love 'drip frenzied, white fireflies'
Some beautiful words in this one. Excellent.
Lovely! Thank you for visiting me and welcome to my world.
oh, a delight!
Delightful! So much imagery packed into so few words. I'll never look at dandelions the same again.
Wonderful! such a poetic line - hypnotic dandelion
Oh my gosh, sensuality your name
is Michelle - what a beauty of a
poem. Brief as a silk slip. LOVE!
such a delightful read. I mean, wow.
lovely and I especially like white fireflies
Beautiful read.
Gorgeous..I especially love the line "Sulk against the summer wind".
wonderfu images!
Wonderful imagery! Fresh and smart!
Very nice. I can see the sway and feel the air flowing! Lovely7 Imagery!
Linda
Beautiful tanka :)
Very visual! :)
Lovely.....
Your tanka is as hypnotic as the dandelion you describe! Stunning!
Good morning Michele, the strip photo that showed up this morning was an accident. I use scheduled postings and must have put the wrong date on it, that post was for Friday so I had to delete it and redo it for the morning. I guess I am not back in the swing of things.
Here is the address for skype (free video calling) http://voip-download-now.com/index.asp?aff=005&camp=gg_skype&se=google we have not used it yet but I have friends at work that do. The one guy calls home with it when we are night shift to say good night to hiw wife and daughter, they can see each other when the talk. My son plans on getting it once we get the grandparents a camera for their system. Hope it helps.
This is truly captivating, Michelle. I really, really like it. Super job.
I love those first two lines. Beautiful, Michelle!
very pretty.
a delightful read...
i like nature a lot :D
Leo
Wonderful.
white fireflies.Wow
~Harsha
Sounds like a love affair!
dragon rider
amazing how dandelions get the short end of the stick... as weeds... you give them full measure here.... the afro was a dynamite detail michelle... i could not help but to secretly smile...
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