autumnal trinket

watching febrile sun
dissolve with fiery zest
autumnal trinket

3ww words are in bold.

14 comments:

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

Lovely portrait of the seasons changing.

Rose

xo

lissa said...

sounds like a dream, like summer never happen, nice one

gautami tripathy said...

Great description in so few words!

Finer details

ThomG said...

Beautiful description in not a lot of words. I like it.

RachelRenae said...

What an ethereal picture. Beautiful job.

Tumblewords: said...

A lovely picture of autumn!

susan said...

What a visual. And a new word for me. :-)

Linda Jacobs said...

I can see this happening and there is fire in my eyes! Great haiku!

lelablonde said...

I wanted to do something like that but I could not pull it together today. Very well said. Well we don't have many leaves.

Greyscale Territory said...

What a sweet sadness there is in this haiku! Just delightful!

anthonynorth said...

Great description there - and we feel the loss.

watermaid said...

Michelle, you have a great command of words. Did you know that 'Autumn' is the prompt this week on the haiku site, one single impression?

TD said...

As an autumn lover, I feel the timely passing of the summer to allow for these beautiful trinkets.
Thank you...

Scott Clawson said...

What I love most about this poem is that in only 9 words, you have creative something that speaks volumes. That was great. "autumnal trinket", I love that combination. Thanks for sharing it.