window

breeze settles on skin
touch of a butterflies wings
an open window


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Naquillity said...

tumblewords said...

The breeze like butterfly wings - nice touch. I enjoyed your page and your post!

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Blogger Clare said...

Hi Michelle! Such lovely images and sensations!! I love this.
:)

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Blogger paisley said...

as i sit here a similar breeze is entering the window above me,,, excellent......

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Anonymous Jak said...

very nice. i think a lot of people do haiku and make it very abstract or deep, etc. not that any way is a better or more correct way, but sometimes a simple dramatic description speaks volumes.

July 4, 2008 at 9:46 AM