tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post4195177124606926930..comments2023-05-08T05:36:44.769-04:00Comments on Naquillity: ...I Will DieNaquillityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-16438783667654473202011-06-29T19:41:33.594-04:002011-06-29T19:41:33.594-04:00good to think about that moment...I like your word...good to think about that moment...I like your words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-60572104695490992232011-06-19T18:41:08.995-04:002011-06-19T18:41:08.995-04:00Poignant and perceptive. Poetry at its best. It ...Poignant and perceptive. Poetry at its best. It brings elegance to the end. Although I'm with Al, hope it stays away for quite a while.Wild_Billhttp://www.wildramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-12313187667845393782011-05-11T22:17:34.700-04:002011-05-11T22:17:34.700-04:00This is very sad, yet eloquent and moving! Great ...This is very sad, yet eloquent and moving! Great work that you should be very proud of!Lynda Lehmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10914824862008453219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-40961971624781782992011-04-05T21:07:12.835-04:002011-04-05T21:07:12.835-04:00What a poignant, lovely ghazal, The rhythm and rh...What a poignant, lovely ghazal, The rhythm and rhyme are perfect for the repeating words. I can tell you have had many awakenings and experiences not everyone has had.christinehttp://balancedontheedge.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-17774758458513898402011-04-04T20:22:35.718-04:002011-04-04T20:22:35.718-04:00OH! I don't know how to describe the thoughts...OH! I don't know how to describe the thoughts that flowed through me....this is wonderful.Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06832295732819342873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-14509635344144285032011-04-04T16:39:11.480-04:002011-04-04T16:39:11.480-04:00It gave me chills too..wonderful..It gave me chills too..wonderful..Rambling Woodshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15080120317890707767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-37646397093242343862011-04-04T09:19:49.647-04:002011-04-04T09:19:49.647-04:00A locket of earth will hold my body's loss wit...<i>A locket of earth will hold my body's loss without pry</i><br /><br />That is a truly awesome line.<br /><br />I actually found the poem to be rather serene.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-18645616668179714252011-04-03T16:35:01.708-04:002011-04-03T16:35:01.708-04:00I think it is a lovely poem. It reminds me of mus...I think it is a lovely poem. It reminds me of music from the Appalachian Mountains. Why don't you print this one off and tuck it in your Bible?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-36804227787131763952011-04-03T15:18:48.487-04:002011-04-03T15:18:48.487-04:00I found it sad, but also uplifting as well because...I found it sad, but also uplifting as well because of the words and imagery you chose to convey the theme. Nicely done.Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-49776853841680833242011-04-03T15:08:06.004-04:002011-04-03T15:08:06.004-04:00Beautiful and powerful words.Beautiful and powerful words.Katerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05645403612156172760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-12861513945815741902011-04-03T14:29:40.819-04:002011-04-03T14:29:40.819-04:00I found a grace to your words
peace with death in ...I found a grace to your words<br />peace with death in your words<br />beauty and oneness in your wordsTammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11279605745446513635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-9755468009038705232011-04-03T14:25:04.172-04:002011-04-03T14:25:04.172-04:00Al's comment above mine made me laugh! How tr...Al's comment above mine made me laugh! How true!<br /><br />I am not much of a poetry lover, but must say this one caught me by surprise!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-26954482358870473182011-04-03T13:26:32.301-04:002011-04-03T13:26:32.301-04:00angie hello. yes, this is a ghazal. i thought it c...<b>angie</b> hello. yes, this is a ghazal. i thought it conveyed the prompt best. glad you liked it. have a great day.Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-37418255928128622022011-04-03T12:16:12.297-04:002011-04-03T12:16:12.297-04:00oh, how beautiful, Michelle! I love the images, es...oh, how beautiful, Michelle! I love the images, especially "the locket of earth." there's nowhere better in the world to be than those mountains...<br /><br />(is this a ghazal?) I have a hard time remembering forms with looking them up!angiehttp://another2doors.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-66039429466174955592011-04-03T11:30:25.886-04:002011-04-03T11:30:25.886-04:00I love "A locket of earth will hold my body&#...I love "A locket of earth will hold my body's loss without pry" so much.<br /><br />xoxoDebnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-51223279786804467102011-04-03T10:57:13.102-04:002011-04-03T10:57:13.102-04:00That's a powerful poem. I've seen enough d...That's a powerful poem. I've seen enough death in my life that I'm somewhat accustomed to it, but I'd like it to stay away from me for a few more decades if possible!Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07826369816985788575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-71372109628008959452011-04-03T09:12:20.037-04:002011-04-03T09:12:20.037-04:00very sad poem...very sad poem...Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-28647872830838264592011-04-03T08:29:53.587-04:002011-04-03T08:29:53.587-04:00Poignant and beautiful poem.Poignant and beautiful poem.Carverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05968919406427737503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-11932622309579622942011-04-03T07:20:49.928-04:002011-04-03T07:20:49.928-04:00This poem sent a chill down my spine, fantastic wo...This poem sent a chill down my spine, fantastic work as it certainly prompted a reaction as all good poetry should. Good luck with the poetry comp.Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08682357133636381359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-78660531244507128442011-04-03T04:11:10.412-04:002011-04-03T04:11:10.412-04:00Oh my goodness. This is so sad. Beautiful, but s...Oh my goodness. This is so sad. Beautiful, but sad.Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07461569436322815787noreply@blogger.com