tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post3345834489828565115..comments2023-05-08T05:36:44.769-04:00Comments on Naquillity: cloudsNaquillityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-41424321408355049882009-08-29T04:50:50.093-04:002009-08-29T04:50:50.093-04:00Hi Michelle,Beautiful poem accompanied by the dram...Hi Michelle,<br><br>Beautiful poem accompanied by the dramatic photo. I love your use of the word “profusion”; it adds power both to the content and musicality. If I read this aloud I would put extra stress that word. <br><br>The whole text is so sensitively structured. One of the things that I always think about when I read your work is your amazing subtle intuition. <br><br>Take care and have a lovely weekend.Jenny Enochssonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17128326064445770505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-21762730521562613792009-08-29T05:25:08.767-04:002009-08-29T05:25:08.767-04:00lovely poem, especially the 'articulate sky...lovely poem, especially the <i>'articulate sky'</i>Crafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-1279666078701172482009-08-29T12:25:45.039-04:002009-08-29T12:25:45.039-04:00Hi Michelle, a profound poem.The last three lines ...Hi Michelle, a profound poem.<br>The last three lines are tremendous<br>and truly apply to life.Cynthiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-48820580786573128552009-08-29T12:52:01.468-04:002009-08-29T12:52:01.468-04:00Beautiful poem to share a spot with the beautiful ...Beautiful poem to share a spot with the beautiful photo. How I wish I could use words to describe what I see and feel, but I think my typing is a big handicap. That and lack of poetic talent.. LOL... MichelleRambling Woodshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15080120317890707767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-50911444685486770012009-08-29T13:22:04.852-04:002009-08-29T13:22:04.852-04:00Wonderful! I especially liked 'a coif for a co...Wonderful! I especially liked 'a coif for a copse of trees.' The poem went so well with the picture. The last three lines are incredibly powerful. <br><br>Blessings,<br><br>JaneJane Doehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-89801686770264562492009-08-29T13:33:32.535-04:002009-08-29T13:33:32.535-04:00So tell me about this one and how it came together...So tell me about this one and how it came together. To me, it doesn't feel as coherent and smooth as your usual work. Am I missing something?Merihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07024443046207501650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-252094981580736762009-08-29T22:38:30.481-04:002009-08-29T22:38:30.481-04:00Beautiful poem, I love the way you combine words. ...Beautiful poem, I love the way you combine words. I like the way the blue clouds are just lightly kissed by the frosting of pink in the photo.desert rathttp://www.celticharper.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-77962300597421625872009-08-30T08:21:56.504-04:002009-08-30T08:21:56.504-04:00Magnificent photo! Lovely poem too, but I am more ...Magnificent photo! Lovely poem too, but I am more visual than intellectual, as you can tell from my blog...many photos, not so many words. We each have our own talents & I can tell that you have a special gift with words:)Sharonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18393517097643673337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-55381077557576059772009-08-30T22:38:21.814-04:002009-08-30T22:38:21.814-04:00Beautiful clouds! Magical words!Beautiful clouds! Magical words!lisaschaoshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13219366045767828564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-78252963919430061332009-08-31T00:52:33.068-04:002009-08-31T00:52:33.068-04:00Lovely words.....Enjoyed reading thisLovely words.....Enjoyed reading thisJeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-64485201111887009002009-08-31T09:44:44.610-04:002009-08-31T09:44:44.610-04:00I loved this line..."a coif for a copse of tr...I loved this line..."a coif for a copse of trees." I'm big on alliteration...;)<br>And "their dead never crowd my moon"- wow, that's awesome!<br>:)Red Birdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-57076800934538199232009-08-31T11:06:36.722-04:002009-08-31T11:06:36.722-04:00great descriptions, has an eerie moodgreat descriptions, has an eerie moodlissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-19731512003601259392009-09-01T09:18:24.741-04:002009-09-01T09:18:24.741-04:00Michelle, what a captivating photo and words to ac...Michelle, what a captivating photo and words to accompany. I love this color! It's one I look for all the time in nature and you've captured it! Wonderful.Quiet Pathshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3023314515424268756.post-34460553090855151032009-09-02T08:48:08.132-04:002009-09-02T08:48:08.132-04:00Beautiful sky! Nice photo!!Beautiful sky! Nice photo!!Kirigalpoththahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00173002776907882231noreply@blogger.com