windshield theater

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tailgating driver
watches windshield theater
natures reflection
geese fly over power lines
fade to black screen... end credits

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electric guitar

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loosed hairstrings on tub
form musical instrument
electric guitar

gray- white cat

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morning's interim
thirty robins flit all round
enter... gray- white cat

gray headed oak

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ice farms to edge of
these mapped territories
a gray headed oak

celestial tea

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lipton sunset spills
across kentucky evening
celestial tea

evening

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encompassing color
emarginates the sky
etching light and dark shadows
evenly along night's
easel. one awaits new
edition with each sun's
ebbing toward... horizon.
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